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KDice Saga : Unexpected relationships (Chapter 10)
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 9:37 AM, Tuesday August 19, 2008 EDT
Characters : Stacy (stacy) - M'ishaks apprentice. She was a jedi knight but after an incident with one of the other students she abandoned the academy and joined sith.
Pheonix (Phoenix37) - a bounty hunter who is more an android than a human right now. He nearly died awhile fighting for Republic, but remained alive and was saved. Republic did not reward him the way he wanted, so he became a freelancer. Lord Vagr (grunvagr) - One of the most powerful Sith Lords at this time. He is very proficient in the use of light saber, but lacks Force powers. - "This is not good!" ,- Stacy shouted, even though she was the only person on her small spaceship. Just before the planet Garox, there was a huge asteroid ring, which was created to defend Garox from unwanted guests. There was only one clear entrance/exit to the planet, but it was heavily guarded. Since Stacy did not have the proper documents for the entrance and exit, nor did she want to be seen, she took the meteor ring, which might have not been the smartest choice... - "Damn computer! Think and find the damn route! I am too young and too pretty to be smashed by an asteroid!" - Stacy screamed. Although she did not take the best route, she managed to reach Garox's surface with a heavily damaged and unfunctional spaceship. - " I hate my life, I hate Darth M'ishak, I hate all of you!" - clearly she was not in the best mood. - "Just great.. a rocky planet with mountains and craters... Oh, can it get any worse??!!" Apparently, It could... ---------------------------------------------- Pheonix was modifying his laser cannon, when he saw a hologram appearing. - " Ah, my dear Pheonix, its always nice to see you!" - Lord Vagr was in a good mood. - " It has been a while my dear bounty hunter. I have a mission for you, bounty hunter. You will have to get to the Xatris for me and find one of the remaining creatures of the Shadow race. You should know that there is a girl coming. Stacy, her name is. She's an apprentice of Darth M'ihsak, but I am sure that she is just his slave. Anyways, Stacy is coming with a message from M'ishak. Apparently he wants you to work for him, but you know how well I could reward you so be smart. When you reach Xatris, find General Sinth. He is one of my men and he will help you find Shadow. May the force be with you" With those last words, the hologram disappeared. -"Arrogant fool, he thinks he has me! I only play by my own rules! Although right now I might go with your flow Vagr, but do not expect it for too long!" ---------------------------------------------- Darth M'ishak was worried. He wasnt sure if he could trust both Stacy and Pheonix. "I must come up with a plan... I can do it... Damn, maybe I should just go see how my other plan works..." M'ishak turned on his holograph and found Syron's contacts. "Syron, respond to this message as fast as you can. I need that scientist now! We can not waste any more time... Xineon is planning something and I feel that others are too unstable in their faithfulness to me. I need an ace in my hand and that would just do... GO NOW!" M'ishak closed the hologram and just sat and waited... Previous chapters : Prologue (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764045) Chapter 1 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764078) Chapter 2 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764093) Chapter 3 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764134) Chapter 4 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764205) Chapter 5 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764289) Chapter 6 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764394) Chapter 7 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764450) Chapter 8 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764490) Chapter 9 (http://kdice.com/discussion/topics/44764582) |
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Filemon Pi wrote
at 1:03 PM, Tuesday August 19, 2008 EDT No clue about who are Stacy, Phoenix37 or Grunvagr, but I like the story. Keep them coming.
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Rorschach wrote
at 1:57 PM, Tuesday August 19, 2008 EDT This is much more fun to read when you are a part of the story. And stop spelling my name wrong.
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Rorschach wrote
at 1:57 PM, Tuesday August 19, 2008 EDT ...not funny anymore.
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stacy wrote
at 2:15 PM, Tuesday August 19, 2008 EDT lol @ Rorsch
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kimmy382 wrote
at 6:08 PM, Tuesday August 19, 2008 EDT TOMTOM!!! you keep forgetting to put me in ur stories :[
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 10:00 PM, Tuesday August 19, 2008 EDT Or am I? :D
Be patient.... :) |
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 1:45 PM, Wednesday August 20, 2008 EDT What would you think if i'd make a thread where you could guess what will happen next, tell your favourite characters, write the feedback and post ideas which could make this even better?
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JDizzle787 wrote
at 10:36 PM, Wednesday August 20, 2008 EDT well for those would find this interesting, yes, that sounds excellent, if you're running short on inspiration. To be honest I haven't read too much of it though. It looks like a good 45 minutes to me.
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 2:36 PM, Monday August 25, 2008 EDT bump
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