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KDice Saga : The prologue
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 1:44 AM, Sunday August 3, 2008 EDT
Characters : Royal Historian Kviz (kwizatz) - The Royal Historian of planet Xatris, who works for the Royal Seat and has a huge influence for the Queen of Xatris.
Guardian Luckie (X Luck X) - legendary warrior, who is thought only to be a legend, that was made up in the past. Prologue "I will never get this finished" sighed Kviz, the royal historian of Imperial Library. But Kviz was not a person who gave up that easily. So he continued writing about the Old Times : ".... and no one was sure wheter that great guardian, widely known as Luckie, which was known to be one of the best lightsaber fighters of all time, truly existed. He was the conqueror of the worlds, The Destroyer, Luckie appeared from nowhere, destroyed "The Order of Jewel" , which was the primary power in galaxy at that time , and then just took his ship "Centurion" and flew to the Outer Rim and never came back." - Finally, the 1st chapter is done, - said Kviz loudly. He was soo tired, that he could hardly stand and just laid down on his bed. But the rest lasted only for few seconds... -Attention all employees of the Imperial Library. We have spotted an unknown miliatary ship over the planet which is heavilly armed and probably hostile. We need all of our priceless info put into the safe, so it wouldn't be damaged, if attack would occur. And please, HURRY UP, - said the voice from the speakers. Kviz sighed again. "I hope its a drill and it will all end soon", though Kviz. But he did not knew that it was only the beggining, a beggining of a new period, a period of darkness.... |
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 1:45 AM, Sunday August 3, 2008 EDT Tell me, if you like it and you want more. Then i'd get some more. And feedback would also be nice....
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jurgen wrote
at 6:40 AM, Sunday August 3, 2008 EDT just skip a few chapters and quickly tell me if Darth Montes son (from his secret wife, queen amiRNDala) will also turn to the dark side or if he will join his sister (Princess leekia) in the rebellion
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unlucky9999 wrote
at 1:18 PM, Sunday August 3, 2008 EDT lol. Jurgen, this is not the original story of Star Wars, but a story of my own creation so none of that will happen. :( sorry
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Major Tom wrote
at 1:27 PM, Sunday August 3, 2008 EDT I want more, sounds interesting....
(Pity I don't know who are kwizatz and X Luck X). |
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jurgen wrote
at 3:24 PM, Sunday August 3, 2008 EDT well so far your story seems promising... so please continue.
If you come to the cliffhanger part of the story, please give me a more important role than dying foot soldier #2 please? Any character with a name will do ;-) |